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Task of Eighth Meeting


Expository Writing

Topic   : Why teens smoke cigarettes?
Title     : The Cause Factors of Teens Smoke Cigarettes





The Cause Factors of Teens Smoke Cigarettes



Do you know cigarette guys? Hmm... or  Do you include of smoker? Why you smoke cigarettes ? Oh No – No ... “Say No to Cigarettes !”  All of things about why teens smoke cigarettes will be explain in this essay.
Cigarette is a dangerous product that have 4000 materials of chemistry and 69 among them are carsinogenic essence which cause smoker get cancer. The dangerous essence onto cigarettes are tar, monoxcide carbon, sianida, arsen, formaline, nitrosamine. The effect of cigarettes is very dangerous to their health. Diseases which is caused by cigarettes are pneumonia, throat cancer, lung cancer, etc. Although cigarettes have been known by smoker and it caused some diseases to their health but  there are so many  smoker whom smoke. Because of that cigarettes contain of nicotine. So, smoker addiction to smoke everyday. If they do not smoke, they feel restless and bored.  When they back  to smoke, they feel quiet and focus. Automatically, they are very difficult to stop for smoking.
            Based on the data that taken from SUSENAS (Survei Sosial Ekonomi Nasional) which done by BPS (Badan Pusat Statistik) founded increasion of quantity smoker from children (5-9 years old) until adult. This case is very bad that happened in Indonesia.  At this time, which to be thoughtfulness is the quantity of smoker rise every year. In this case, its mean that the accretion exist of new smoker. The new smoker is teens.
Teens smoke cigarettes causes by three dominant factors. The three dominant factor are parents and families, social intercourse, and advertisement of cigarettes. Those factors are very influence to teens for smoking cigarettes. Below are the description of three dominant factors.
The first factor is  from parents and families. In this factor, one of the discovery that teens smoke cigarettes is the teenagers who come from unhappy family. Because of why? because of their parents do not care with their child. Whereas their child always needs care and love from them. Teens smoke cigarettes not only lack of care and love from their parents but also they imitate their father who smoke everyday. So parents and families should divide their time to their child. In order to their child who include of teens do not smoke.
The second factor is social intercourse. Teens should interact with their environment. And also they choose a good social intercourse. In fact, it have been prove that teens include of smokers, most of their friends are smokers. Social intercourse in their world is very important because they need interact, share the experience to the other friends, or they want to ask their friend to give solution of their problem.
And the last is advertisement of cigarettes. This advertisement is very influence to them. Because advertisement of cigarettes  always suggest that the smoker is the symbol of glamorous. So there are teens that participate and want to try for smoking.
From the causes above, if the teens want to aware that smoke is very dangerous to their health. So they can prevent it with the various way that they should do. The various way  include of tips to keep their body healthy. There tips are; first, teens should know about effect of smoking. Second, they should fill their spare time with positive activity. Third, they change their usage smoke with consume snack or candy.
            To sum up, let us keep healthy life and begin to leave smoke, in order to the smokers avoid from the diseases. Especially from teens, they aware that smoke is very bad attitude and have many financial loss in their health and future. They can reach their ideal well and success. For parents they should give care for their child. In order to their child always in the right way and have a good attitude.

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Purple           :Hook
Red                 : Statement
Green            : Explanation
Blue                : Conclusion (type : suggestion)