Expository Writing
Topic : Why teens smoke cigarettes?
Title : The Cause Factors of Teens Smoke
Cigarettes
The Cause Factors of Teens Smoke Cigarettes
Do you know cigarette guys?
Hmm... or Do you include of smoker? Why
you smoke cigarettes ? Oh No – No ... “Say No to Cigarettes !” All of things about why teens smoke
cigarettes will be explain in this essay.
Cigarette
is a dangerous product that have 4000 materials of chemistry and 69 among them
are carsinogenic essence which cause smoker get cancer. The dangerous essence
onto cigarettes are tar, monoxcide carbon, sianida, arsen, formaline,
nitrosamine. The effect of cigarettes is very dangerous to their health.
Diseases which is caused by cigarettes are pneumonia, throat cancer, lung
cancer, etc. Although cigarettes have been known by smoker and it caused some
diseases to their health but there are
so many smoker whom smoke. Because of
that cigarettes contain of nicotine. So, smoker addiction to smoke everyday. If
they do not smoke, they feel restless and bored. When they back to smoke, they feel quiet and focus.
Automatically, they are very difficult to stop for smoking.
Based on the data that taken from
SUSENAS (Survei Sosial Ekonomi Nasional) which done by BPS (Badan Pusat
Statistik) founded increasion of quantity smoker from children (5-9 years old)
until adult. This case is very bad that happened in Indonesia. At this time, which to be thoughtfulness is
the quantity of smoker rise every year. In this case, its mean that the
accretion exist of new smoker. The new smoker is teens.
Teens
smoke cigarettes causes by three dominant factors. The three dominant factor
are parents and families, social intercourse, and advertisement of cigarettes.
Those factors are very influence to teens for smoking cigarettes. Below are the
description of three dominant factors.
The
first factor is from parents and
families. In this factor, one of the discovery that teens smoke cigarettes is
the teenagers who come from unhappy family. Because of why? because of their
parents do not care with their child. Whereas their child always needs care and
love from them. Teens smoke cigarettes not only lack of care and love from their
parents but also they imitate their father who smoke everyday. So parents and
families should divide their time to their child. In order to their child who
include of teens do not smoke.
The
second factor is social intercourse. Teens should interact with their
environment. And also they choose a good social intercourse. In fact, it have
been prove that teens include of smokers, most of their friends are smokers.
Social intercourse in their world is very important because they need interact,
share the experience to the other friends, or they want to ask their friend to
give solution of their problem.
And
the last is advertisement of cigarettes. This advertisement is very influence
to them. Because advertisement of cigarettes
always suggest that the smoker is the symbol of glamorous. So there are
teens that participate and want to try for smoking.
From
the causes above, if the teens want to aware that smoke is very dangerous to
their health. So they can prevent it with the various way that they should do.
The various way include of tips to keep
their body healthy. There tips are; first, teens should know about effect of
smoking. Second, they should fill their spare time with positive activity.
Third, they change their usage smoke with consume snack or candy.
To sum up, let us
keep healthy life and begin to leave smoke, in order to the smokers avoid from
the diseases. Especially from teens, they aware that smoke is very bad attitude
and have many financial loss in their health and future. They can reach their
ideal well and success. For parents they should give care for their child. In
order to their child always in the right way and have a good attitude.
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