Task of third meeting

Identifying Paragraph and Showing or Analyzing with Adequate and Inadequate Cohesion

Paragraph can not separate by coherence, cohesion, unity. All of those are the characteristics of a good paragraph. Making paragraph need good organization like topic sentence, supporting sentences, concluding sentence. Then, develop into paragraph with detail. Cohesion and coherence has corelation that holds paragraphs together. Having good coherence in a writing means that the ideas stick together from one sentence to the next, so the readers can easily understand.Without cohesion, a written work can’t easy to understand by the readers.

How to write paragraph with adequate and inadequate cohesion :

1. Fixing the main idea or topic sentences.
2. Making supporting sentences that support the main idea or topic sentences in detail.
3. Develop a paragraph base on supporting sentences in a paragraph.    
4. Conclude that sentences become concluding sentences.The concluding sentences can  be summary, logical, suggestion.
5. Revising the paragraph with added the components of cohesion like    relevance,chronological order, linking word or transition word, 
        repetition of keywords  become a good paragraph.
6. The first sentences has related to the next sentences.        
   

     

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       Cohesion is combination the ideas from one sentence to the next sentences in a paragraph. Cohesion is the criteria of paragraph that has components like relevance, chronological order, linking words or transition word, repetition of key words.

The differences between coherence and cohesion :

Coherence

Coherence is arrangement of relationship the ideas stick together from one sentence to the next sentences in a paragraph. Paragraph coherence is achieved when sentences are ordered in a logical manner and when clear transitions link sentences.

The components of coherence are chronological sequence, modified chronology, spatial position of different objects, logical form of sentences.

Cohesion

Cohesion is combination the ideas from one sentence to the next sentences in a paragraph.

It has four components, they are relevance, chronological order, linking word or transition word, repetition of key word.

Analyzing with adequate or inadequate cohesion

“The sentences which underline below are sentences that has adequate cohesion or categorized into cohesion ”

It’s About My Self

Well everybody, I would like to  describe my self and all of thing about my self. My purpose to write this paragraph is to inform the other people. In order to the other people  know about me. In this paragraph, I describe about my identity, my hobby, my personality, my appearance. Let’s read carefully ! My name is Defy Gustianing. Sometimes my friends call me Defy, but the other one they are my family include of my parents, my sister, my grandpa, my grandma call me Empi. It’s funny, right ? I think It’s never mind.  I was born on Margototo, August  7^th  1994. I am 19 years old.  I live at Jalan Nusantara No. 4, Margodadi 25 A – metro selatan – kota metro. I live with my beloved father, mother, and sister. I am a female and I am a beautiful girl. My weight is 48 kg and my height 166 cm. I have a thick eyebrow and beautiful eyes. My nose is not pointed but not flat. I have thick lips and sweet smile. My colour skin is light brown. I use veil. I am very kind, lovely, patient, shy sometimes fussy with the other my friends. I am a very good child in my family. I am the first child of two child in my family. My parents are very love me. Then, I have the best thing in my life. That  is about education. In education field, I get a lot af things, experiences from there. One of them is,  I can continue my education background in university. Because of half the students in the outside can’t continue their education in the university. It’s about economical in their family.  So, I can praise thank you to God, because of his mercy and fortune that given to my parents. I can continue my education to reach my idea in the future. Talking about hobby. My hobby is reading. I usually reading about novel, subject book, fiction. Now I am still finishing to read novel. The  title is “berjuta rasanya by Tere Liye”. It is very interesting story that I should know about it. I really interest with my hobby that is reading. There are so many experience that I can get from there. It’s very fun. I have activity in my spare time.  I usually traveling with my friends to go to bookstore like Gramedia, Salemba to buy book like novel. Sometimes I just take a rest in my home help my mother and I always gather with my parents, my sister at living room.  To be conclude, I am very kind girl who have sweet smile and sometimes fussy.

Sentences	Explanation (Categorized into cohesion)
My name is Defy Gustianing. Sometimes my friends call me Defy, but the other one they are my family include of my parents, my sister, my grandpa, my grandma call me Empi.	The sentences include of categorized into cohesion, because the second sentence has corelation with the first sentence. The word “name” is the idea of the first sentence. The second sentence still develop the idea of the first sentence. It has related.
I was born on Margototo, August  7th  1994. I am 19 years old.	The sentence include of categorized into cohesion, because it still related. The first sentence contain of  adverb place and date of birth. The second sentence contain of age. It has refer to the first sentence.
I live at Jalan Nusantara No. 4, Margodadi 25 A – metro selatan – kota metro. I live with my beloved father, mother, and sister.	The sentence has related to the next sentence. The first sentence contain adverb of place. The second sentence explain or related to the first sentence.
I am very kind, lovely, patient, shy sometimes fussy with the other my friends. I am a very good child in my family.	The sentences include of cohesion because both of the sentences explain about personality aspect. Especially, attitude. It has related  from the first sentence to the second sentence.
I am the first child of two child in my family. My parents are very love me.	The sentences include of cohesion because the first sentence explain about the writer in her family. The second sentence flatten it.
Then, I have the best thing in my life. That  is about education.	The sentences include of cohesion because the word “then” in the first sentence is the component of the cohesion. It is include of chronological word. The second sentence related.
In education field, I get a lot af things, experiences from there. One of them is,  I can continue my education background in university. Because of half the students in the outside can’t continue their education in the university.	The sentences consist of three sentences. The sentences include of cohesion because all of the sentences related and explain the idea  in the first sentence That is about “education”. It has related to the next sentences.
My hobby is reading. I usually reading about novel, subject book, fiction.	The sentences include of cohesion because both of the sentences explain the idea the first sentence.”hobby” is the idea of the first sentence. It has related to the second sentence.
Now I am still finishing to read novel. The  title is “berjuta rasanya by Tere Liye”. It is very interesting story that I should know about it.	The sentences include of cohesion because it related the information from the first sentence. “It” refers to the book that the writer read.
I have activity in my spare time.  I usually traveling with my friends to go to bookstore like Gramedia, Salemba to buy book like novel.	The sentences include of cohesion because it related from the first sentence to th second sentence. The second sentence give more explanation that the writer do in the spare time.